rusting

coming of age for the aged...ever read something your wrote and say...what?!

here's to being our worst critic. i feel the sentiment in the words but not the logic of the thought. but then again, when are feelings strictly logical? the most potent often defy straight definition...

i'll take a gander at this piece again at a later time and may be more appreciative for the slice of experience it tries to touch in the writing... it's attempting to fly with broken wings...ah metaphors, rusting metaphors...